SolZen321 - We are only what we decide we are, revelations only change our opinion of ourselves: TALK - Unlimited
I have no idea what you were trying to say with that last message, but some of your edits, are not really about grammatical accuracy as they are about a preference with wording. You don't need to add 'Ultraman (name)' when it's clear who the page, or paragraph is talking about.
Don't edit other user's personal user pages. e.g Eduardloei
It's nice if you want to try to help other users on the wiki but you should never edit another user's personal user page unless you have permission from that user. So next time ask, and only do any thing if the user says you can.