Talk:Battle World: Kaiju vs. Robot Battle Collaborative Writing Project/@comment-1733689-20130731152813

This is crazy. There is nothing but entertaining writing here, but the scenes change to quickly from one plot  to another or what ever and this is only the first chapter. The rules say be mindful of the paragraph before yours, but no one has connected any of the paragraphs yet. People please try to make some sense out of this.